First Draft (Positives & Negatives)

to improve
What to improve on-:
- the dark shots are very grainy. this needs to be fixed if the shots are long, however in quick succession we can probably get away with it
- the colour shots need to have some kind of filter on them to improve the colour: the saturation is very high
- we need more footage to be the base of the video rather than performance

What was good-
-the use of black and white is used well and highlights us as band members
-the various angles that we use are good as we use a whole range such as high, low, close up

Plan to improve these-
We will hope to improve these issues in editing by using various effects to get rid of the grainy effects. 
We will also make sure not to make these mistakes when we film on Wednesday as we have learnt from these mistakes.