The feedback from our year group helps to highlight what went well in the first draft of our music video as well as what can be improved upon.
Strengths-
- Ellie's performance is excellent
- Keep the black and white
- Best video by far
- Splits mouths shot is good
- Very strong performance esp Ellie
- Dom's smiling in his own car
- Ellies performance
- Dom's pro driving
Weakness
- Why is Zahra playing a box?
- The box...why?
- Need a bit more convincing performance by Dom + Zahra
- Need to focus more on Ellie
- Zahra isn't playing drums at start
- Some shots to dark
- Black and white constant is questionable
- Focus more on Ellie
- Drunk kit is off
Overall it was clear what people thought went well which was Ellie's performing as the singer for or band. And what people thought needed to go better which was Zahra performance on a box set instead of a drum kit.